WONDERFUL writing, Ayrton! I'm so proud of you. You have such a creative mind, I loved reading your story. I couldn't wait to find out what they would do once they caught the moneky. The vocabulary you used is phenomenal. I particularly liked the word "parkour" - well done. Also, great work on the use of adjectives and adverbs. It really enhanced your story! The use of punctuation was awesome too ... you really showing off your writing skills. Keep working hard, Ayrton!
WONDERFUL writing, Ayrton! I'm so proud of you. You have such a creative mind, I loved reading your story. I couldn't wait to find out what they would do once they caught the moneky. The vocabulary you used is phenomenal. I particularly liked the word "parkour" - well done. Also, great work on the use of adjectives and adverbs. It really enhanced your story! The use of punctuation was awesome too ... you really showing off your writing skills. Keep working hard, Ayrton!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Miss Lloyd that is such a nice thing to say.
ReplyDeletegood job Ayrton
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